Final front cover

Second draft of double page spread with audience feedback

''Really love the photograph but I think you need a title to entice the audience''

''Lovely picture''

''The quote stands out and makes me want to read it''

''I like the picture but you need  a title''

Second draft of contents page with audience feedback

''The photograph is too stretched''

''Needs a title''

''Easy to understand layout''

''The thumbnail images need page numbers, I really like the idea of photographs makes it interesting''

Second draft of front cover with audience feedback

''Too much empty space''

''Put more pictures on''

''The name doesn't stand out enough''

''I like the layout and the photograph but there's too much space''

First draft of double page spread with audience feedback

''I really like the image but it's too small''

''The white background on the right side of the page is boring''

''Really like the image but can't you put a background on the right side''

''Love the image and the barcode text but other side is too blank''

First contents page draft with audience feedback

''The picture is too similar to the one on the front cover which makes it a little boring''

''I like the structure it is easy to read and understand''

''I like the use of plenty of images make it interesting''

''I like the photos''

First front cover draft with audience feedback

''The writing doesn't stand out enough, you can't make out what it says very easily''

''The picture isn't eye catching or interesting enough''

''I like the idea of the plus sign and a list of what is featured underneath it's helpful''

''The name gives a good indication of what the magazine is about''