Friday, 30 March 2012

Evaluation



1. In what ways does your media product develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?         


My front cover (on the right) has a few similar characteristics to NME’s front cover (left). They both have a large masthead situated at the top of the page so they can be visibly seen and identified on the shelf in the shop. I decided to use the colour white as it boldly stands out on the front cover and has a clear contrast to the grey image I have used. NME have used black, although they regularly alternate which colour the masthead is depending on the edition. Above the masthead is a skyline, this gives a short understandable introduction into what the magazine is about an its ideology, the skyline I decided to go for is “The inspiration of today’s greatest artists..”. The reason I chose this is because it entices people as it’s an interesting and intriguing. NME have also decided to place theirs above the masthead its visible and easy to read. At the bottom of my front cover I have discreetly put a barcode that is because it’s necessary to have this on the page however conventionally the barcode does not dominate the page as it does not give any indication as to what is in the magazine which is what’s important for the front page of a magazine. NME have also placed their barcode in a place that is not dominant and like mine in a bottom corner. Conventionally located near the barcode is the price, this is essential to any magazine as customers need to know the price. ‘Indie’ music magazine such as my own and similar to “NME” and “Kerrang” are usually priced around £2-£2.50, therefore I have placed mine at this price. Unconventionally I haven’t placed the date on the front cover, I have decided to put it clearly and visibly on the contents page, I chose to do that because I didn’t want too many small pieces of text on the cover as I believe it draws attention away from the main dominant image. NME have put the date on their front cover, they have placed it above the masthead therefore they’re using it as their skyline. Sell lines are essential to any magazine as they tell the reader exactly what is inside the magazine and therefore help to sell the magazine. Conventionally a magazine has one dominant image and then smaller thumbnail images with sell lines on their front covers. However I chose to have one dominant image to show that it’s the main article in this edition and then I have included a ‘plus’ section showing what else is to be featured in my magazine. The sell lines on my cover are “the secrets behind the album” and the quote “Art is both life and death and it doesn’t matter which”. NME have placed the ‘NME’ logo on the left third, just as I have done. It’s visible from a shop shelf.




For my contents page I decided to go for traditional and conventional with the layout due to the importance of having a clear structure to a contents page so that it’s easy to read and understand. Situated at the top of both mine (left) and NME’s (right) is that they have the masthead “Inside this week”, this gives the customer a clear indication into what is going to be featured on this page. Underneath I placed the date, this
was due to it not being put on the front cover and the need for a magazine to have a date so you can easily identify which edition it is. Unlike the front cover a contents page doesn’t need dominant images therefore I have several images to make the contents of the magazine appealing however gave the less important articles a smaller picture. I placed the page number underneath the photos so that it’s easy to navigate around the magazine and simple to understand where the articles will be. Also underneath the thumbnails are quotes or a short piece of anchorage signifying what the article entails, it entices the customer into wanting to read that particular story. All these things are very conventional of a music magazine; I decided to take the conventional route due to the need for simplicity on a contents page. I aimed to make the photographs tie in with the articles and look like those that would be in a music magazine of the ‘Indie genre’ as that is my target audience. A convention of the Indie genre is to have instruments in the images therefore I included four images with instruments in. The images reinforce what the ideology of this magazine is. Placed at the bottom right corner of my contents page is a puff advertisement, this is again traditional of a magazine, especially as mine is advertising for an Indie music festival, it all links in together. Just like the NME contents page mine has a ‘Plus’ section. This lists the other articles in the magazine, however they’re ‘regulars’ that are featured most weeks, and smaller less significant or interesting articles, therefore they are merely a title and clear bold page number, rather than a quote and thumbnail. Regulars include things like reviews and festival + gig guides.

My double page spread is conventional in that it has a large headline situated at the very top of page, just like NME mine is the name of the band/artist that is featured in the article. Therefore mine reads ‘Alison Mosshart’, she was the most dominant image on both the contents and the front cover, this is because this particular edition of the magazine is about her, and she’s the main focus point. NME have chosen for their article about ‘The Chapman Family’ to have the dominant image of the band on only one page and then placed the article alongside it on the opposite page, I however decided to have my image spread across two, this is because I believe it to be more appealing to look at, however it is unconventional as usually it’s only on one page and the other side is blank making the article easier to read. At the lead of my article the writing is in a bold font, as a result the audience can quickly scan over this and find out exactly what the story on the band or artist entails, this is called a strapline. Conventionally I chose the make the writing bold rather than large, which is what NME have done in this edition featuring The Chapman Family. On the article itself I have put a pull quote, this is an interesting piece of the text made larger and visible to read when just glancing over the page, therefore you’ve read a bit of the article unintentionally and it acts as a tease device into wanting to read the rest of that article. I have also followed the tradition of a magazine and included a drop cap on the beginning of the article; this is incorporating conventional aspects in my magazine. On the bottom of my dominant main photograph I have put a caption describing what is in the photograph, this is again conventional. I wrote the word ‘exclusive’ on the image this shows that this particular story/interview is special and particular to my magazine only, this makes my magazine sound better, it’s another tease device as you want to buy it.

2. How does your media product represent particular social groups?



My magazine is conventional with its stereotypes of the audience who would read my magazine. My magazine is aimed at the indie rock genre; therefore it has a lot of black and white images. The black has connotations of rock. Therefore I decided to have my main image on the front cover in black and white. She is wearing a denim jacket with connotations of ‘coolness’ however underneath she is visibly wearing black clothing connoting rebellion and rock music. The use of a black and white image also reinforces the idea that my magazine is about ‘icons’ as icons stereotypically are from past generations and that ties in with a black and white image. My magazine is for both genders therefore I haven’t represented my magazine as being for a certain gender only. I have done this through not picking a colour scheme that would traditionally be for only one gender. If I had used colours such as pink it may have looked as though my magazine is aimed at females. Artists of the indie genre generally are more bothered about their music rather than their image, which is why I chose the artist in the photograph on my cover to be wearing casual clothing rather than glitzy clothes which is how models in fashion magazines are represented. The casualness of her jumper and jeans signifies she doesn’t care. It also means that the ‘indie’ audience can relate to the girl in the image. She is smoking a cigarette; this again represents the indie social group and the readers of my magazine. On the Socio economic scale I think the audience of my magazine falls under D-C2, this is because my magazine like NME’s is aimed at teenagers, they generally are not in professions and also are stereotypically at the age of ‘rebellion’ and ‘festivals’ etc. It is evident from the type of advertisement’s I have placed on my contents page exactly who my magazine is aimed at. The bands featured in my magazine wouldn’t appeal just to the teenage readers of my magazine; however the actual magazine is clearly for teenagers due to the informal language and pictures on my contents page.



3. What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?

Although my magazine is revolved around ‘individuality’ and ‘independent’ bands I think when it comes to publishers my magazine would be published by one of the major publishers rather than an independent one. The reason for this is that my competitors would be a magazine like NME, due to its similarity with artists and kinds of stories featured; therefore it has already been proven that magazines of that style are popular amongst teenagers and to reach them I think my magazine would need to the help of a major publisher. NME are with a different major label (IPC Media). I don’t think that they would publish mine due to its likeliness to NME. I feel as though it would have a better chance of gaining credibility and success if it were to be published by a larger company as they have the means to push it forward into the public eye resulting in higher sales and an easy spread across several other media platforms. Due to this the one I would most like to publish it would be ‘Bauer Media’ because of their widespread choices of magazines to publish. They publish magazines such as “Kerrang” and “Q”, these magazines are similar to mine in that they’re musically alternative and therefore I know that they are willing to publish such magazines. However my magazine isn’t too similar to “Kerrang” as my magazine focuses more on the general ‘indie’ genre which is widespread rather than Kerrang which mainly focuses on the heavier side of the alternative genre. They have spread the brand “Kerrang” across many platforms due to its popularity and I’d hope they’d do the same to mine as it would boost sales. My magazine is different to Kerrang in that it isn’t specific to one gender only, it will appeal to both.



4. Who would be the audience for your media product?

When I first started researching existing successful music magazines I had a clear view on what I wanted to create. An alternative indie music magazine that would feature iconic artists that have inspired today’s artists. I throughout the process stuck to that brief however when researching existing magazines found that mine needed to be more widespread as I found that magazines such as “Kerrang” are very niche and I didn’t want mine to be that way. I think that through expanding the audience so that it’s less specific and niche that I would open up my magazine to a lot larger audience however still remaining ‘indie’. My target audience is teenagers who enjoy the alternative genre of music. For this reason I tried to include a lot of ‘rebellious’ acts in my music magazine such as smoking which connotes coolness and black clothing connoting rock. Traditionally teenagers are at the age of rebellion and aiming to be controversial, therefore I used a unusual quote on my front cover “Art is both life and death and it doesn’t matter which” alongside the dominant image of a girl smoking, this instantly would entice my target audience of a rebellious teenager. My magazine is for both genders, therefore I have not used a colour scheme that would prevent either gender from reading it. It’s neutral as it’s black and white. Due to the age of my audience they would be from the D to C-2 category on the social demographic, this is due to their age, they would not have a profession. I aimed for my music magazine to be like NME, however mine to have the unique selling point in that it not only focuses on new bands but a lot more on older bands and how they’ve influenced the new. It’s the same target audience though, when researching I found out that their target is teenagers, this reinforced my idea to aim for teenage readers. It is even clear who my target audience is from the advertisements I have used, I placed one for the alternative music festival “Coachella” on the contents page. Coachella’s target audience is teenagers and people in their early twenties, the same niche audience that would be reading my magazine.

5. How did you attract/address your audience?

As the majority of my target audience are teenagers, I opted for a price that would suit them. Generally speaking teenagers don’t have jobs as they are still in school or attending sixth form, it is for that reason that I priced my magazine at an affordable price of £2.40. It is a reasonable price for what you get inside and I think that pricing it so fairly would be a great deciding factor in whether or not teenagers would buy it. If it were priced too high they may only buy it occasionally or not at all. As I would only release an issue every 2 weeks, it makes the price even better as they do not regularly have to pay that out. On my contents page I placed a competition/advertisement for a music festival of which is aimed at teenagers, therefore it would attract them towards my magazine to get involved in the competition. Unlike a glitzy fashion magazine, mine has a casual artist on the front smoking. It represents her as casual and relatable however at the same time cool and rebellious. The readers of the magazine would aspire to be her as she’s not glamorised and wearing a dress and heels but she’s individual, cool and she’s in a band therefore ‘living the dream’. If the teenagers can aspire to be like her but at the same time not be intimidated by her it means that they can feel a part of the magazine. They would feel part of the ‘scene’ if they can relate and see aspects of themselves in the artist. The clothing (black = rock and roll) is similar to that of which the audience will stereotypically be wearing as ‘indie’ individuals. If she were to be dressed formally it wouldn’t appeal to my target audience.

6. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?Through the process of creating my magazine I had to use a whole range of different technologies. At the beginning I started by using Google to research into existing magazines and find out which out I had the biggest interest in. After much researching using the internet I discovered that the magazine I most enjoyed was NME and therefore set out to create a similar magazine within the ‘Indie’ genre. I used the internet to find out what the conventional layout of the music magazines were. Once I’d set about creating hand drawn mocks ups I used publisher to create more using images that I found off Google (these are on my blog). I took my pictures using a digital camera and added them to my digital mock ups without editing them; I then got some audience feedback on them that gave me help on how I could improve them. Here is one of my very first drafts of the front cover of my magazine..

Using photoshop I edited the picture for my final front cover. Using the blur tool I blurred the edges around the girl so that she stood out against the background and used levels to create a glow around her, this connotes that she's an Icon and all the focus is on her literally as this edition is about her. Using photoshop I turned the image 'black and white' this gives the image more of a look of importance. Here is my final front cover to see the edits..



7. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?

^^ Here is the college magazine I created at the start of the year when I first began creating and researching magazines. I knew that my magazine must conventionally include a masthead, skyline, barcode, date, price and sell and cover lines. This was from researching existing college magazines. I however didn't use photo shop at all to get a professional looking dominant image which I really feel let my magazine down. Not only this but the sell lines and teasers aren't easily visible to read from the shelf. I discovered along the process that language also plays and important role within the creation of a magazine as it needs to appeal to the audience and therefore using interesting and enticing language is vital. My sell lines aren't catchy or interesting enough so wouldn't appeal to readers, this was something I kept in mind when I started making my music magazine. Something I didn't understand in the preliminary task is that if the masthead of the magazine is the logo of that brand then it can be put onto several other media platforms. All in all I think that a lot more time, effort and research went into my music magazine as my understanding of magazines and their layout, conventions and structure had greatly improved thanks to the internet and the buying of magazines.

Thursday, 8 March 2012

Second draft of double page spread with audience feedback


''Really love the photograph but I think you need a title to entice the audience''

''Lovely picture''

''The quote stands out and makes me want to read it''

''I like the picture but you need  a title''

Second draft of contents page with audience feedback



''The photograph is too stretched''

''Needs a title''

''Easy to understand layout''

''The thumbnail images need page numbers, I really like the idea of photographs makes it interesting''

Second draft of front cover with audience feedback



''Too much empty space''

''Put more pictures on''

''The name doesn't stand out enough''

''I like the layout and the photograph but there's too much space''

First draft of double page spread with audience feedback

''I really like the image but it's too small''

''The white background on the right side of the page is boring''

''Really like the image but can't you put a background on the right side''

''Love the image and the barcode text but other side is too blank''

First contents page draft with audience feedback



''The picture is too similar to the one on the front cover which makes it a little boring''

''I like the structure it is easy to read and understand''

''I like the use of plenty of images make it interesting''

''I like the photos''

First front cover draft with audience feedback



''The writing doesn't stand out enough, you can't make out what it says very easily''

''The picture isn't eye catching or interesting enough''

''I like the idea of the plus sign and a list of what is featured underneath it's helpful''

''The name gives a good indication of what the magazine is about''

Wednesday, 29 February 2012

L.I.I.A.R Analysis of a contents page


This contents page is from Kerrang magazine and has a neat, simple and concise layout, which makes it easy to read and allows the reader to navigate around the magazine without struggling to find page numbers. On the right hand side of the page is a long list of the articles featured in the magazine these are in a clear and easy to read font so minimum effort is needed, situated next to them are the page numbers in bold writing so they are highly visible. It is evident just from looking at the column with the featured articles in that this edition of Kerrang has a simple yet strong colour scheme of black, white and yellow. The colour yellow is that similar to the yellow used on 'caution' signs, with the skull. This indicates the type of music and bands in this contents page. The masthead reading 'Contents' is at the very top of the page in large writing, it draws the readers attention straight away and gives a clear indication of what this page is about (listing the featured articles). The more important and interesting articles that aren't part of the 'regulars' (things featured every week/month) have a thumbnail above them that relates directly to the article. They are stereotypical and conventional of a alternative music magazine such as Kerrang because they show heavier bands on stage and holding instruments. The people featured in the photo's have tattoos, wear a lot of black and are doing 'rebellious' poses, this reinforces that this magazine is alternative and also fits the typical stereotype of what you'd imagine someone who reads Kerrang looking like or aspiring to be. The colour black which is in a lot of photo's holds the strong connotation of rock and roll and rebellion, this reinforces the sorts of bands in a magazine like Kerrang. Underneath each thumbnail is a short introduction to what the above article is about or a interesting quotation which instantly makes you interested in the article. Various language techniques are used to make the article so much more appealing such as 'unleashing', it gives a connotation of danger like unleashing an animal, this links back to the idea of being 'cautious' on this page. The name of the band is also directly underneath the photo is bold writing which is conveniently placed there for the reader to easily read and know who is in the photograph they are looking at. This magazine contents page is conventional for an 'alternative' magazine as it's simply structured and not too heavily glamorised such as a pop magazine would do, this is because they are more about the music and talent rather than hiding behind the glitz. These musicians are represented as being more about the music (posing with instruments) and also being 'individual' and 'rebellious' by wearing a lot of black and posing controversially e.g. the photo at the top of the page showing a member of 'The Blackout' holding a gun. 

L.I.I.A.R Analysis of a contents page


At the very top of the page the writing reads 'Inside this week', this gives a clear indication of what is going to be on this page (the featured articles of the magazine). It's in bold, clear and easy to read writing therefore it's understandable for the reader at first glance which is exactly what you want for a contents page. Situated underneath this is the date of this edition of the magazine, this allows the reader to know when this issue was published which can also be helpful for collectors of such magazines. Thumbnail images are used to reinforce what the featured articles are about and also helps to make the page a lot more appealing/interesting to read. In the corner of each thumbnail in large text is the page number, therefore the reader can easily navigate effortlessly around the magazine and it also creates structure within the magazine. Each image relates directly to the article and it is evident from this contents page that it's a music magazine due to the type of images e.g. a man holding a guitar. Underneath this image is a quotation from the article reading "Next month's mortgage payment has a question mark hanging over it'', this is a tease device as to what the article is about and also makes you interested in the article. The quotation is larger than other pieces of text this creates diversity on the page which again makes it more pleasing to look at. Some of the thumbnails are larger than others which gives a indication of what the main articles are and which are just small stories rather than interviews or in depth reviews of the bands. All thumbnail images have a quotation, it's important for these to be on the contents page in order to help give an idea of what the article consists of. Various language techniques are used to entice you into wanting to read these stories such as 'Ian Brown Baffles at Benicassim' this is alliteration which gives emphasis on the piece of text and leaves you wondering why did Ian Brown baffle?. Controversial quotations have been used, it's stereotypical for bands of the indie genre such as would be in NME to be rebellious in that way e.g. ''The album has a lot of cock on it''. This quote is also in capital letters and bold, therefore your eyes instantly dart to it when you open the page. The images that are used are appropriate to the text, the image of  Mick Jagger is accompanied with a article about him, this however doesn't seem to be a 'feel good' article which is evident through both the text and the expression on Mick's face. The colour scheme on this page is just black and white, it's simple which is typical of a indie magazine, as they're more about the music rather than trying to hide behind colour such as a pop magazine would do. This contents page is very conventional and easy to read. At the bottom of the page is the writing 'Plus', underneath it features the regular things that are in the magazine such as  'Reviews etc.'. They are also accompanied with  page numbers in a bold font so it's clear where you can find these articles.

L.I.I.A.R Analysis of a contents page

Situated at the very top of the page is the phrase ''Inside this weeks'' this illustrates to the reader that this page is primarily for kickers and showing what articles are featured in this weeks edition, however it can also be used for advertisement's such as getting ''NME for just £74.99!''. The writing naming the articles on the page is all very clear and in block sans serif writing so it's read effortlessly on first glance, however quotations are apparent through the usage of serif writing within quotation marks, these are small teasers to the stories and entice the reader into that particular story. Next to the kickers is the location of the story, this is done so that the magazine is simple to read. Dotted around the contents page are thumbnail pictures relating to the stories and helping to illustrate who the articles are about and what they involve. These make the magazine look more visually appealing too. On the right side of the page is that kicker regarding the John Lennon story featured on the front, this ties both together. Language techniques are used such as ''a tribute to the original rock'n'roll star''

L.I.I.A.R Analysis of a double page spread


In a slightly larger font to the rest and in clear writing situated above the article is an introduction, this gives a clear indication as to what the article is all about and also helps to entice people into the reading it because usually it is a catchy and interesting piece of text which is used. This one reads ''She's 2009's biggest success story, with America at  her feet. So why is Florence Welch lying on the floor attacking herself?'', instantly you want to read on because it has used a rhetorical question, it's a language tease devise designed to make you want to read on to find out why she's 'attacking herself'. This introduction also links heavily to the image which shows Florence Welch sitting on top of a box which has an America flag slung over it, therefore she is quite literally got 'America under her feet'. The image is both large and dominant, it represents her as being strong and successful, this also due to the serious look on her face which indicates she's hard working. Because the image is so large she looks as though she's strong, which contrasts with the swirly serif text reinforcing her gender which makes it all so much better that she's so successful. This double page spread evidently is portraying Miss Welch as a strong, independent female character. In the image she is wearing a black leather body and large black leather Jeffrey Campbell's, these represent her as being feisty and rebellious.The idea that she's feisty links in with her hair colour (red) and the colour scheme (red), this is due to the strong stereotype of a 'feisty redhead'. Also leather stereotypically has the strong connotations of rebellion and rock and roll, it is typical for a indie music magazine to have an image of one of their featured artists wearing such clothing. The first letter 'D' of the article is dominant on the page and in swirly black writing, this links back to the idea of her being a dominant female wearing black. The article itself is set out in a easy to read font and set out in clear columns, therefore it's easier to understand and read the article. Behind the image of Florence is writing that reads in large 'USA' , because she's in front of it and spread across it gives the ideology that she's tackling America and everybody in America knows who she is. It also represents her as physically being as big as America, so perhaps she's also musically on the same scale.As Florence is of the 'indie' genre it is unusual and unconventional that she's posing as usually they are more about the music and therefore do not bother, however this could be perceived as her being controversial towards what her genre expects her to do.  

L.I.I.A.R Analysis of a double page spread



"The Chapman Family'' is in large writing that stands out across the page this is there for impact, it instantly draws the readers attention towards this article and entices you, it also gives a clear indication as to what the article is about. i.e this article is specifically about the band 'The Chapman Family'.  Situated at the very top of the page on the right hand side in a slightly larger font than the rest is introduction to the article, this allows readers to have a quick scan read of what the article subject is, it is usually a catchy and interesting sentence making you want to read on further. The article itself is written in a clear font, therefore you do not have to struggle to see the writing and also its set in columns, this is conventional of a music magazine and prevents any difficulties understanding the article. In the centre of the article is a quote, this could be considered a tease device as you have to read the full article to understand exactly what the quote means, usually the quote is an interesting piece of text from the interview with who the article is about. A large a4 image of the band 'The Chapman family' has been used to show the readers who the article is about, but also it makes the page more appealing to readers.  The band are from the 'Indie' genre and as a result have a stereotypical conventional image of them looking casually at the camera, rather than posing as they would if they were featured in a pop music magazine. The image is slightly unusual as they are wearing blindfolds, again this is tying in with the idea that they are 'alternative' and 'rebellious'. They don't follow the conventions of a usual normal band photo. Towards the side of the band there is a guy wearing a t-shirt which reads ''The Chapman family is not a cult'', this is a controversial statement, this reinforces that they are individual. The rest of the page is fairly simple and isn't covered with any 'glamorous' extras, this implies that the band are more about the music and do not need to hide behind anything to show that they have talent. The image however does not follow the Indie genre convention in that this image does not show any of them holding their instruments which is usually what is done for an alternative band. The faces of the band members look stern this represents them as taking what they do (making music) very seriously. The highlighted and chosen quote by the magazine to use in a larger font reads ''I've been shot for the way I look before. It's not big thing for me'' this is both a controversial and unusual thing to say, therefore you instantly as a reader become intrigued and feel you need to read on to know more. The tone of the sentence sounds casual again referring back to the idea of them casually slumped in their chairs being 'cool' and 'rebellious'. At the very bottom of the right page is the 'page number' this allows the reader to navigate around the magazine easily. Because 'The Chapman' family are a simple indie band the colour scheme also follows this, however what little colour there is on the page is clear that it's only Purple, Pink, Black and White.

L.I.I.A.R Analysis of a double page spread

The title is large in a sans serif writing to make it visually accessible, it reads 'THE LAST DAYS OF LENNON' which ties it in with the front cover of that magazine. There is a clear colour scheme of black, white and red which was also on the front cover. The black and white gives connotations of rock and roll and of been and old picture. Lennon is smoking and wearing his signature round sunglasses which holds the strong stereotype of been 'cool' and 'rock'. All the writing is set out neatly in columns so it's easy to read and understand with a large dominant image of John, to illustrate what the article is about. The editors name is at the bottom so you can see who wrote this particular article, it gives them credit and the consumer someone to contact. The image is a photo of John Lennon on the day he died, therefore it's significant to the article.

Draft of my double page spread using images off Google

Draft of my contents page using images off Google

Draft of my front cover using images off Google